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Contest entry - fanart 
14th-Aug-2008 11:21 pm
I am speechless.

Featuring Izuru, Wabisuke, and Shuuhei... in order of how often they appear. There's something wrong with this picture.

Warning: They look really funny in some panels - my attempts at anatomy are hilarious - to the point I got fed up and you can notice the lack of details on the later pages in comparison to the first one. I'm so impatient. And considering this is my style of drawing, the characters obviously doesn't look exactly like themselves.

I added vague summaries to each page because my handwriting is crooked and unreadable in some areas.


Izuru comes to check up on Shuuhei at the dead of night.
"Hisagi-san, are you done with the paper -"
Shuuhei fell asleep in the midst of his work.
"Hm. Really, Hisagi-san."


Oh god, the first panel is hideous.
Shuuhei mutters to himself in his sleep.
Wabisuke appears, though 'it' can only be seen by Izuru.
He actually leans to touch Shuuhei as means of comfort, but it got blacked out since it was not worth seeing. At all.


Shuuhei says Kaname's name in his sleep.
Wabisuke launches into a 'scolding':
"What are you afraid of? Being his replacement?
You are you. You can never be another's fill in, Izuru."


Izuru leaves a note (it's a lame haiku because I fail at poems) behind and departs.
Wabisuke fades.

It... Izuru stole the spotlight again. I was going to have a lot of Shuuhei in it, I swear. But even Wabisuke (who I refer to as female again) got more panels than him... albeit she ended up looking really strange in the last page. Noo. T_T This is totally wrong, it does the 9th lieutenant injustice. Wake up, Shuuhei, please. I didn't even get to draw your tattoo, for Pete's sake. At least the general 'plot' was centered around him in that sense...

This isn't a favorite of mine, obviously, but I'm glad to have done multiple pages for once. The intent of this was to make Izuru the supporting character this time, while in the fanfiction I made Shuuhei the one to listen to his schoolmate.

Next time I do something with these I'm leaving Wabisuke out for that bit. 'It' takes up too much spotlight. |D

One more thing off my to-do list. I am slowly freeing myself. Curse work, bah.
Comments 
15th-Aug-2008 07:23 am (UTC)
Buuuh sweetest storyline ever~!! And I love the way you drew Wabisuke as well, she has a strange gloom to her only Izuru's zanpaktou should have.
My faaavourite panel is on the first page the second last panel where Izu is half smirking, that is soooo cute!!
15th-Aug-2008 08:33 am (UTC)
Why, thank you. ♥ Wabisuke is basically Izuru with a very long bang instead of the fringe and hair that curls both ways in the end. With a woman's attire, of course. Gloominess is reserved for Wabisuke, and Wabisuke only~

That's my favorite panel too, we need more scenes of Izuru smiling where he doesn't look drunk!
15th-Aug-2008 09:58 am (UTC)
Awwww...the look on Izuru's face when he says "Really, Hisagi-san" made me melt! ::is the biggest sap on the face of the earth::

Poor Shuu. I like how this kind of centers on Tousen's betrayal of Shuu. In the fandom, it's almost always Gin's betrayal of Izuru!

Lovely work! Good luck in the contest! ♥
15th-Aug-2008 07:04 pm (UTC)
I feel for you, I'm a big sap myself. That face is my favorite panel, so~

Kaname's betrayal is the least elaborated on compared to that of Gin's and Sousuke's, so you don't see much around that in the fandom unfortunately. Shuuhei needs more love too, yes?

Thank you!
15th-Aug-2008 10:47 am (UTC)
asdfghjk; really sweet introspective comic *v* ♥ thanks for sharing.
15th-Aug-2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Ah, so glad you think so. ♥ Thank you~
15th-Aug-2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
This is soooo sad and yet sweet! I really like it ~ especially that you drew wabisuke too (I never seen it drawn before)! :D I thought it sweet when Kira goes to help Hisagi with the paper work but when he hears him mutter his Taichou's name the look on kira's face is so heart breaken!

Awesome work, psssh forget with perfect anatomy or order - I like it, you have a cute style! (I forget it all the time)~~~
15th-Aug-2008 07:07 pm (UTC)
Wabisuke is often forgotten in a lot of fan works, so I wanted to apply 'it' here except that the zanpakutou ended up taking more panels than Shuuhei. Urk. If Izuru was to comfort him when Shuuhei was thinking about someone else, then it would basically mean he's replacing Kaname, and he doesn't want that. I don't think anyone would like to be another's replacement, really.

Ahaha, they just look so stiff in some panels, so that's what irritates me. Thank you, though!
18th-Aug-2008 05:17 pm (UTC)
That is very sweet. *smiles*
19th-Aug-2008 12:29 am (UTC)
But not the artwork I bet. xD

Glad to hear it!
19th-Aug-2008 03:25 am (UTC)
*laughs*!!

I actually found that the artwork added a lot to the story. The expressions you have are very appropriate to the story you created.
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